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Modern Tanka
Tanka Collection
: Golden Sunset by Gypsy Blue Rose
For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes


Golden sunset
is warm and heavy 
with eucalyptus scent —
a promise of tomorrow
hangs in the air



 

Author Notes
Modern tanka:

Tanka poetry refers to a Japanese 31-syllable poem, traditionally written in 5/7/5/7/7 Japanese syllables. In english is 31 syllables or less without strict form. Tanka use many literary devices, including personification, metaphors and similes to allow ample visualization.

examples of modern tanka

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

     

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