Exceptional Yes, I made ... The escape ... by Wendy G 80 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry

My head is down. I can't look. It's a claustrophobic experience. I feel trapped. It's dizzying. Am I moving? Impossible. All sounds are distorted: the thumping, swishing, swirling, bumping, pushing. Crushing arms approach. I need to escape! My vision is now blurred, my heart is racing, my head aches. How long? Time is not moving. Lights keep flashing, warning. I make my escape. My time was not over! But I don't care! I drive out of the automatic car wash.     Writing Prompt Write a story of 80 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 80 words. Recognized Author Notes (80 words according to the FS site, and my count also). I think I missed the last bit of the car wash experience! Some true, some fiction, some exaggerated for the purpose of the story!

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