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Six Feet Under 6/6/6/6/6/6
One Thousand Cranes
: Wherever You Go by Gypsy Blue Rose
New Form created by Gypsy Blue Rose


beyond the beyondness, 
jagged clouds trudge along, 
with weeping drizzle rain,
falling haphazardly, 

over thirsty mountains,
and dried up plump-top trees.


 

 

Author Notes
Haphazardly = Randomly

Jagged clouds are called Stratocumulu, gray and white low-level patches lined up in rows or spread out with light drizzle of rain.

SIX FEET UNDER is a new form created by Gypsy Blue Rose. It consists of six lines with six syllables in each line. Lines connect grammatically. Never rhymes. Any subject. Any Title. Six feet under is a phrase used for dead and buried.

Line 1: 6 syllables
Line 2: 6 syllables
Line 3: 6 syllables
Line 4: 6 syllables
Line 5: 6 syllables
Line 6: 6 syllables

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

     

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