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“Surprise!”

I’ve been practicing how to do this for weeks. As each day gets closer, I am a mixture of nervousness and excitement. My parents, back in Australia, have no idea that I’m coming. I have not been home in six years, and I know they’ll be thrilled.

I give myself a pat down. Tickets, passport, money; all there as I wait for my taxi to the airport. A knock announces its arrival.

“Surprise!!”

My parents stand at the door!

 


Writing Prompt
Write a complete story in 80 words or less.

The theme is 'Surprise.'

You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.
Surprise! 80 Words or Less
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Author Notes
This is my dream of what I hope to happen in a few months when I intend to surprise my family

     

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