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5/7/5 Poem for the Contest
Stargazing With Dad by Gypsy Blue Rose
    5-7-5 Contest Winner 

stargazing with dad —
he recalls constellations 
but forgot my name



 

 



Writing Prompt
Write a poem with 5-7-5 syllable count. First line has five syllables. Second line has 7. Third line has 5 again.
5-7-5
Contest Winner

Author Notes
A constellation is a group of stars that appears to form a pattern or picture

Alzheimer is a term for memory loss serious enough to interfere with daily life. Signs of early-onset Alzheimer's begin between a person's 30s to 60s.

5/7/5 poem written in 3 lines with a 5/7/5 syllables pattern. The lines are connected grammatically and it doesn't rhyme. It's similar to haiku but has fewer rules.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

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