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Cool Creek Creaks by Gypsy Blue Rose
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cool creek creaks beneath

weathered bridge in the woods —

leaves crunch under hooves

 

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Author Notes
This haiku is modern because it has heavy alliteration. In classical haiku you don't.

MODERN HAIKU is an English adaptation of the Japanese classic haiku. It's written in one to four lines no strict syllables count but as brief as possible. Images are taken from nature. Seasonality is optional, though often featured. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. The Haiku Foundation of America

This week we are writing Autumn Haiku. If you would like to join the Haiku Club click here and look for it on the list of clubs. Let me know if I can help.


Thank you very much for your review and your valuable time,

Gypsy

     

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