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Commas Make a Difference by tempeste
    Just for Fun (5-7-5) Contest Winner 

Now I understand
their importance: meanings change.


Oh it's raining
, shit


Writing Prompt
Can you make 'em smile in only 17 syllables spread out in three lines of 5-7-5. No other rules apply! Don't worry about kigos, punctuation, concrete imagery etc. Do whatever works.
Example:

Don't eat yellow snow
It's not healthy as you know
Besides, it tastes bad!

This is just for fun, so be creative and let your imaginations run wild.

Just for Fun (5-7-5)
Contest Winner

Author Notes
I was looking for a pic to go with my poem and I found this article.

Enjoy!

Paste and copy .. looks like now and then poop actually
rains from the sky.

https://www.google.com.au/amp/s/www.vice.com/amp/en/article/wjbm3w/poo-raining-from-the-sky-in-canada-government-says-not-planes

     

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