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A Choka Poem-for the club challenge
Love's Light by kahpot

beneath lotus wings

hiding beyond moonlight's gaze

innocence ascends

balmy waters undisturbed

as rising beauty

illuminates freedom's bliss

scarlet ibis nests


upon mirrored companion

content to adorn love's light

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Author Notes
This weeks event is to write a CHOKA. It's a form of Japanese court poetry of the 6th to 14th century consisting of (5-7 5-7 5-7- 5-7-7) syllables pattern.
Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose for leading this club
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