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A Pinned Decimal response to Dolly
Time for Change by Chrissy710
Artwork by Renate-Bertodi at FanArtReview.com


Tis time for all to rearrange
Make change; get rid of grime.
For we must climb, this mountain range
So strange and full of crime.

We've lost our way with greed and dirt,
and now our world is full of hurt.

Be kind, bring love in all we do
Stay true; and then we'll find
We wont be blind, we can come through
Renew our peace of mind.

 Christine 18/1/2021





 

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Author Notes
I have written this in response to our Dolly who has called out to all writers and I have used this Pinned Decimal Described by Dolly form as follows

10 lines as follows
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First Stanza rhyme scheme
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I hope my poem meets this requirement

My content is about changing our lives and starting to renew our values and starting again without all the negativity and greed we seem to have become used to

Lets hope that 2021 can be a new year ( despite our ongoing pandemic challenges) and that we can all look to a much better future for all everywhere, with leaders who will show the way through tolerance, compassion, fairness and truthfullness and love , which we should all acknowledge in our daily lives. enough said

Thanks for reading my work

Thanks to Renate Bertodi for the image climbing to the unseen top

Cheers Christine

     

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