Exceptional 5/7/3 Senryu Slow Angels by Gypsy Blue Rose for rules, please check my author notes

old man falls on snow there waits for paramedics — slow angels     Recognized Author Notes Slow angels can be taken as an old man who can't get up makes snow angels, or slow paramedics. It's part of senryu's satori juxtaposition Senryu is a Japanese short poetic form similar to haiku but focuses on people and it doesn't require a season word (kigo). It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS, usually in three lines. It portrays the characteristics of human beings. A common misconception about senryu is that it is exclusively a satirical and or humorous poetic genre. There's another side of senryu, a more serious side that expresses the misfortunes, the hardships, and woe of humanity. It goes back to late 18th century Japan. source: wikipedia other sources: source: shadow poetry; a href=https://senryucircle.home.blog/definition-of-senryu/>source: senryu circle; source: prune juice ============= Thank you for reading my senryu, Gypsy

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