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Grandfather reminisces about a kiss
Promises to Keep by RodG
100 Word Dash writing prompt entry

As Davy, my grandson, played with plastic soldiers near the hearth, my mind spun back in time.

"Soldiers become like brothers right quick," I thought.

Jake Raines and I, just finished with Boot Camp, were heading for Korea. Katie, my blue-eyed, honey-haired sister, had driven down to Fort Bragg to see me off.

"She's right pretty," Jake whispered as Katie approached.


Walking right up to Jake whom she'd not met, Katie wagged a finger.

"Take care of my brother," she demanded.

Jake grinned. "Yes, ma'am."

"You promise?"


He nodded.

She threw herself against his chest and kissed him.


Writing Prompt
Topic: A first kiss between strangers.

Let's take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story with just 100 words. If so this is your opportunity to shine.


Author Notes
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WORD COUNT: 100 exactly. Apple Pages

     

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