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Haiku ('bove snowy mountains)
Raptor Takes Winter Flight by Mark D. R.
5-7-5 writing prompt entry

'bove snowy mountains
twilight melts into darkness 
~
hawk reconnaissance


Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 Poem! This is a poem with only three lines. The catch is there is a strict syllable count. The first line has 5 syllables, second 7, third 5 again.

Author Notes
Thanks to FanArtist for digital art image.

Some may feel that 'aeries' is a better word choice than 'mountains' and better reflects the artwork. But for me, mountains is plural and aerie works well in singular) and melt, as an alliteration device, go better together (-;

     

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