Family Poetry posted October 12, 2020


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Sisters and friendhop

Sister love

by Mary Vigasin

I love you sister, but you are not my friend.
To my older sister, you often ran over my thoughts.
You often dismiss my ideas.
You cut me deeply by destroying a belief.
I love you sister, but you are not my friend.
To my younger sister, I was shocked to find you are cruel.
I overlooked times when your biting tongue hurt others.
Until I tried to get close to you and felt your bite.
You have no patience and will easily chew others out.
I love you sister, but you are not my friend.

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Again I use free verse because I am not a poet. Sisters are not always friends, they may be different in age and experiences.
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