General Poetry posted September 23, 2020


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Cloud of Dust

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Dedicated to Elders in Rest Homes


cloud of dust drifts through 
sunbeam in solarium —
Grandpa nods on lazy boy

routine days on end
in dreadful pandemic age —
visitors day is canceled



 


 




The sedoka is a Japanese poetic form that consists of two tercets of five, seven, and seven syllables each.

Thank you very much for reading me,

Gypsy
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