General Poetry posted August 29, 2020


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a Rondaful poetic form

Sunset's Robe

by Sugarray77

Pale mountains blend and move as I survey
a golden orb low in the western sky.
Deep fire shines within each golden ray
     in silken swirls...

As sunset's robe with layered undertones
in muted patterns please my inner eyes,
sweeps o'er the tumbled boulders' rocky bones
     trails with no end...

Pale mountains blend in silken swirls
     as sunset's robe trails with no end.



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There is a sunset happening every moment of every day... it trails with no end.

A Rondaful schematic:

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There are end rhymes and internal rhymes.
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