Humor Poetry posted August 3, 2020


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My flaw is talking loud.

Shouting

by Raul1

Whenever I try to strike
a conversation with my parents,
I shout most of the time.
It happens sometimes.

I can't seem to stop shouting
when I tell my dad of a 
topic, my mom hears my screams,
it accidentally comes out,
they want to know why.

It comes out naturally by accident,
people can hear it from outside
my home, while present inside.
I try not to talk loud,
it's like I'm speaking to a crowd.

My flaw is talking loud
by mistake.
I am trying not to,
I can't help it.
Though, I can solve it,
it will take time.



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