General Flash Fiction posted August 2, 2020 |
100 word flash
A Perfect Fit?
by lancellot
“I don’t know, Jack. My mother said...”
“Come on, Crisy. We’ve been dating six months now. We’re a perfect match in every way. Aren’t you curious?”
“Yes, every time you show me. I want to try, but… I heard it’ll hurt…”
“It won’t. Beside, it’ll only be a few seconds; just to see.”
“Just to see if it fits?”
“I promise.”
“Okay. I trust…”
“Good! Open; hold still. It’s in. How does it feel?”
“Oh, it’s… too… big.”
“Does it hurt?”
“No, but…”
“It's tight..."
"Take it... out, Jack.”
"Damn. It doesn't fit."
“Your retainer won't work. I need braces."
100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
“I don’t know, Jack. My mother said...”
“Come on, Crisy. We’ve been dating six months now. We’re a perfect match in every way. Aren’t you curious?”
“Yes, every time you show me. I want to try, but… I heard it’ll hurt…”
“It won’t. Beside, it’ll only be a few seconds; just to see.”
“Just to see if it fits?”
“I promise.”
“Okay. I trust…”
“Good! Open; hold still. It’s in. How does it feel?”
“Oh, it’s… too… big.”
“Does it hurt?”
“No, but…”
“It's tight..."
"Take it... out, Jack.”
"Damn. It doesn't fit."
“Your retainer won't work. I need braces."
“Come on, Crisy. We’ve been dating six months now. We’re a perfect match in every way. Aren’t you curious?”
“Yes, every time you show me. I want to try, but… I heard it’ll hurt…”
“It won’t. Beside, it’ll only be a few seconds; just to see.”
“Just to see if it fits?”
“I promise.”
“Okay. I trust…”
“Good! Open; hold still. It’s in. How does it feel?”
“Oh, it’s… too… big.”
“Does it hurt?”
“No, but…”
“It's tight..."
"Take it... out, Jack.”
"Damn. It doesn't fit."
“Your retainer won't work. I need braces."
Writing Prompt Write a flash fiction story. 100 words exactly. Title not included in count. |
Forgive my corrupted mind. I saw this picture and this is what came. A little 'Three's Company' tribute. I miss that show.
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