General Poetry posted July 8, 2020


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
A Sijo Poem 3,4,4,4,3,4,4,4,3,5,4,3

The Shepherd

by Gypsy Blue Rose

As I watch 

my white sheep eat

and gently sleep 

on green pasture,

 

I’m serene

and full of pride

for fulfilling

my Father’s tasks.

 

Lead my flock,

when weather is harsh,

 

out of harm’s way —

home at last.


 

Write A Review


Recognized


Sijo is a Korean traditional poetic form that emerged in the Goryeo period dynasty 918 to 1392 was a period of intense religious fervor and is still written today. Bucolic, metaphysical, and cosmological themes are often explored. Syllable count: theme 3, 4,4,4; elaboration 3,4,4,4; counter-theme 3,5 and completion 4,3.

I was inspired by Marjon Van Bruggen, Perspective.

Thank you very much for reading me,

Gypsy
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Gypsy Blue Rose All rights reserved. Registered copyright with FanStory.
Gypsy Blue Rose has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.