Mystery and Crime Flash Fiction posted July 6, 2020

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When things go wrong

Clean Exit

by Mia Twysted

Mike stuffed the cash into the duffel bag.

"They're coming, Brad," Mike said to his partner-in-crime. "Get a move on it."

Brad rushed around in circles filling his getaway bag.

"I knew this was a bad idea from the start," Brad said. "I can't believe I let you talk me into this."

"Just shut up and pack."

"It's true. You cause me nothing but trouble."

"Quiet," Mike peered out the window, "it's time to run."

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