Mystery and Crime Flash Fiction posted July 6, 2020 |
When things go wrong
Clean Exit
by Mia Twysted
Mike stuffed the cash into the duffel bag.
"They're coming, Brad," Mike said to his partner-in-crime. "Get a move on it."
Brad rushed around in circles filling his getaway bag.
"I knew this was a bad idea from the start," Brad said. "I can't believe I let you talk me into this."
"Just shut up and pack."
"It's true. You cause me nothing but trouble."
"Quiet," Mike peered out the window, "it's time to run."
75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry
Mike stuffed the cash into the duffel bag.
"They're coming, Brad," Mike said to his partner-in-crime. "Get a move on it."
Brad rushed around in circles filling his getaway bag.
"I knew this was a bad idea from the start," Brad said. "I can't believe I let you talk me into this."
"Just shut up and pack."
"It's true. You cause me nothing but trouble."
"Quiet," Mike peered out the window, "it's time to run."
"They're coming, Brad," Mike said to his partner-in-crime. "Get a move on it."
Brad rushed around in circles filling his getaway bag.
"I knew this was a bad idea from the start," Brad said. "I can't believe I let you talk me into this."
"Just shut up and pack."
"It's true. You cause me nothing but trouble."
"Quiet," Mike peered out the window, "it's time to run."
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