General Poetry posted July 2, 2020


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a short narrative poem

When the Teacher Fails

by RodG

Failure Contest Winner 
It's June and the school year's ending.
I'm standing at the classroom door
saying farewell to thirty students
I'll likely see no more.
I smile and wish them well, pretending
to be happy when I'm not.
A teacher fails if all don't pass.


Dan walks by me without a word--
the only sophomore I flunked.
My whispered "Sorry," goes unheard.
The grade book shows his oft-failed tests
and too much homework not turned in.
It doesn't reveal my lackings though.
A teacher fails if all don't pass.


That failure nags at me all summer long.
It makes me ponder, reassess
my actions, methods, lesson plans.
Repeatedly I ask myself,
"What didn't I do? Where'd I go wrong?
Is the fault my style . . . or is it me?
A teacher fails if all don't pass.


Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem about failure. No rhyming patterns.

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Artwork is courtesy of Google images.

This may surprise many of you, but most teachers I knew and worked with felt a great sense of failure if any of their students did not pass or were not promoted.

My mentor, who was a terrific teacher, told me this repeatedly: You cannot reach every student.

But I tried, and when one flunked, I truly felt it was my fault. This poem hopefully illustrates what I mean.
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