General Poetry posted June 3, 2020


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Poem about love.

Give It A Shot

by tempeste

Love can excite and delight
take you to great heights,
make you feel you're a kite
dancing in the sunlight.

Some loves are meteorites;
they burn bright then explode like dynamite,
destined quite fast to fizzle out.

Other loves that seem airtight
can turn into nasty dogfights;
tensions rise when intentions turn ugly.
Life together becomes a bitter fight,
'n the one you loved with all your might
becomes a snake ready to strike.

Love is a risky affaire;
it can be magic or turn tragic
It can often scare
cause success is not a guarantee;
yet despite all uncertainties
one should dare to make that leap
rather than stay meek and weak.


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