General Poetry posted May 30, 2020


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There is only one Blue Ridge ... it could not be duplicated

The Blue Ridge

by JLR

A man needs not to say mountains
when one utters the words, Blue Ridge
with those, not so, crystal clear views
atop western NC mountains.

when your eye's see smokey terrain
A man needs not to say mountains,
covered with ash, poplar, hemlock,
maple, birch, laurel ... some pine too,

Standing in awe of the wonder
of a mighty Creator such
A man needs not to say mountains,
unmistakenly artistic.

Atop western NC mountains
time does slow to a calmer pace
you do strain to hear God's whisper!
A man needs not to say mountains.



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#1805
2020


Potlatch Poetry Quatern with Assigned Topic The challenge this week of 5-29-2020

Topic--Landscape Note: NC is North Carolina
Select a picture of a landscape and use it to compose a quatern.
Rules/Info
*Line 1 becomes line 2, then line 3, and finally line 4 in your poem.
* 4 Quatrains ( 4lines each ) of 8 syllable lines
*Meter and Rhyme are optional--author's choice or not.

photo compliments pixaby

Club entry for the "Quatern with Assigned Topic/The challe" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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