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A Sedoka Poem

Lonely Tears

by kahpot

though lonely tears fall
creating rippling puddles
on isolated pavements
~~
soon, combined footsteps
will splash in sunshine's freedom
evaporating sadness


Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.


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