General Poetry posted May 5, 2020


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A dog takes cover on a hot summer day.

Hot Dog Day (no pun intended)

by Lance S. Loria

Old dog lies in shade,
Knows it's a hot summer day.
Tail swatting away the flies.

Kids stop to pet him,
Panting tongue is hanging out.
They bring a fresh water bowl.

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Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.
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