General Poetry posted April 18, 2020 Chapters:  ...9 10 -11- 12... 


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free verse

A chapter in the book Carolina Pastorals

Flow

by estory

Flow
flowing
and flowing on
into the overflowing
landscape of waterfalls and lava flows
in the flow of changes

Changes in direction
changes in composition
changes in transubstantiation

In the flows of metamorphic
emerald, amethyst, anthracite
diamonds flowing through solid rock

From the mountain of gold
silicon electromagnetic
currents of datastreams

The flow of information
in the flow of facts
and figures flowing
in the hypothetical
theories of evolution

Evolving into
explanations of the inexplicable
imprecise and transmutable

Particles flowing in waves
flowing through matter and energy

From one state of mind
to the next



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This is a free form flow of language, a stream of consciousness poem about change, movement in form, movement within form, and a transcendence of forms through energy. It combines a fragmented viewpoint with a stream of motion, an attempt to capture that sense of evolution within nature, and also the evolution from nature into our own evolved platforms of information. A sense of going from one state of mind, to the next. it was fun to play around with the rhythms and sound patterns to create this, and I hope you just enjoy it for what it is. estory
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