General Fiction posted April 18, 2020


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Sometimes you're in a time-sensitive situation.

Tick-Tock

by Mary Kay Bonfante


"I'm stuck, up to my waist. This must be quicksand!" Betty exclaimed, panicking.

Her husband, Gerald, raised his hands. "Just. Stop. Moving."

He found tree limbs to throw beside her, which she held onto. "These might keep you, um, afloat."

Meanwhile, he called 911.

"I hope they're fast!" Betty cried.




Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry

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Thank you to Little Bogie 007 on FanArtReview.com for the artwork, Our Sands of Time.
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Artwork by Cindy Sue Truman at FanArtReview.com

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