Commentary and Philosophy Fiction posted March 31, 2020


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A Metaphor For Life

by patcelaw

























I see life as a changing of location as we age. In our earliest years life to me, was like being on a grassy knoll beside a babbling brook, and all things were fresh.

Then as a young adult life, it became like a mountainous locale where the climb was tough at times.

Still further at mid-life my locale changed to flat plains and an easy slog with fewer pressures.

When I got old, life then became like a dry, arid dusty desert, with the sands getting into my body and the grains began rubbing me raw and causing great pain.

I am looking forward to the day when it is all over for me and I am with the Lord, in the beauty of and everlasting perfect locale.


-Patricia Lawrence
3-31-
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