General Fiction posted March 25, 2020

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Seeing him.

The Encounter

by Coco Jane

Me?  He wants to talk to me?
How long has he been watching?  Whyever did he pick me?
Here he comes. My heart’s racing.  What will he say? What will I say? I gotta be ready.
My breathing is pained gasps.  I’m so exposed. Everyone can see us.  This could be life-changing. 
Lick your lips.  He’s here.
Tall.  Perfectly groomed.  Handsome.
He leans down to where I’m sitting.
“Ma’am, I stopped you for going 42 in a 30 mph zone.”


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