General Poetry posted March 24, 2020

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we all have been thru

A Love

by victortouche

So now
the time's
so fine...

my overripe
don't mind
the crack,

'cause it
comes back
when you decide

to walk along
and shine again
on me.



Just a note on fruit overripe.


victor touche
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