General Poetry posted March 22, 2020


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20 Word Poem

Mister Cardinal

by Val Crisson

Mister Cardinal
came to visit me today
bearing messages of love from above
and sweet memories of life long ago



20 Word Poem contest entry


There is a legend, that when a cardinal comes to visit he represents a person who has passed away. Usually, a loved one or family member. Also, I chose not to use any punctuation or dashes as I like the flow. I made Mister Cardinal a proper noun as I like this personification.
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