Mister Cardinal

by Val Crisson

Mister Cardinal
came to visit me today
bearing messages of love from above
and sweet memories of life long ago

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There is a legend, that when a cardinal comes to visit he represents a person who has passed away. Usually, a loved one or family member. Also, I chose not to use any punctuation or dashes as I like the flow. I made Mister Cardinal a proper noun as I like this personification.

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