General Poetry posted March 3, 2020 |
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Haiku
haiku (in the far pasture)
by kiwisteveh
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Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry
I have edited this following some excellent suggestions from several reviewers.
Yep, I know this is 5-7-3 - the rules state that it is not compulsory to follow the more traditional 5-7-5 format and it is clear, at least to me, that the shortened satori line is much stronger.
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. Yep, I know this is 5-7-3 - the rules state that it is not compulsory to follow the more traditional 5-7-5 format and it is clear, at least to me, that the shortened satori line is much stronger.
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