General Poetry posted February 27, 2020

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Are they Satan's disciples roaring?

ice fire

by Henry King

ice fire quake and wind
Satan's disciples roaring
or God's final wrath

Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry


We have not taken good care of our home which was built by God. Is it because we are following Satan's disciples, who are roaring, seeking someone to devour? If we are doing that, could they then be the result of God's wrath?

From the responses I have received, this Hai Ku has done what I intended to do - it made readers pause and think.

I thank Susannethompson2 for allowing Fan Story members to use her awesome painting titled Abstract Approaching Storm. The art has drawn many favorable responses from my reviewers.
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Artwork by suzannethompson2 at

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