General Poetry posted February 15, 2020


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Joker

by tempeste

Merl teases my cat
He hops, feeds in our green patch
Pete too fat, no match



5-7-5 bye bye blackbird writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a three-lined poem with a syllable count 5-7-5 where line one has 5 syllables, the second line has 7 syllables and the last line has 5 syllables. The topic is bird or birds. Creative approaches welcome.


Merl -another name for blackbird

Pete was my talkative cat. He always hoped to catch a merl/ blackbird that fed everyday in our green patch .. the critter got a kick in provoking Pete ..he knew that Pete , being over weight, was too slow.

I 'm sure in his cat dreams Pete caught the critter more than once. ( biggrin )
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