General Fiction posted February 5, 2020

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Last Moments

The Note

by Wils

“Sixty years together

Never apart

Leaving as one”


The policeman read the note and surveyed the scene before him. The elderly couple sat at the dinner table, hand in hand. The remains of a glorious meal lay before them complete with red wine, open medication packets stacked neatly to the side.

Unable to contain his emotion, the young officer allowed the tears to flow as he wept for his grandparents.


70 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
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Write a flash fiction story. 70 words exactly. Title not included in count.
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