General Poetry posted January 31, 2020


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For a year or so, we sent letters back and forth.

My Long-distance Valentine

by Gail Denham

He was far away, across the sea,
in army fatigues, serving our country.
My bestest friend happened to be
his cousin, so I had tales of how he

slept with one of his knees in the air.
It seemed to her, he had little care.
So I wrote a note to this soldier guy.
He wrote right back, I don't know why.

His letters were fun, quite big on the humor.
My friends drew near when there was a rumor
that I had a letter from this winsome fellow,
who made them laugh, oft brought a bellow.

"Please, read it out loud, so we can giggle."
Still, no sweet talk to make my heart squiggle.
He wrote that he worked high up on a hill,
while far below, fields spread like green spill.

But then came the day he appeared at my door.
Now, need I tell you very much more?
In days I knew this man was for real,
and within months we'd sealed the deal.

My mom did voice her slight concern
Was this too fast? Did she discern
a problem with my quick decision?
We're wed 60 years, by God's grace, no revision.


How I met my valentine writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a rhyming poem, any length, about how you met your valentine.

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Thanks to MKFlood for the appropriate artwork. His letters were funny and interesting. We had our ups and downs, for sure - but I'm thankful to God for this man.
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Artwork by MKFlood at FanArtReview.com

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