General Poetry posted January 19, 2020


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a sedoka

by the grace of God

by judester

Sedoka Contest Winner 
one stroke of bad luck
ripped the roof from his good life,
plunked him down on the cold streets.

with a glance, she strides
avoiding the homeless man,
by the grace of God, walks by.


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The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line Katauta with the following syllable count 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka may address the same subject from differing perspectives
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