General Poetry posted January 17, 2020


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Scale Squared

by victortouche

This room
remains

I hope,
'tis
always so

Colors
Memories
Order

Cannot...
last
Nor, us

Only the past
lingers
ever present

Formal room
contains
only reminisces

Images
of forlorn order
layer themselves
with dense entropy

Happiness resides
within my room
as I sit
with abstractions and brush



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#2150
2020


Yes, I know reminisces should be reminiscences,
but I did not like it that way.

LOL

victor touche
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