Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 16, 2020


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Free verse for class assignment

The Dreamer

by damommy

 

The Dreamer
shared his heart
his talents
showing
beauty
that went unseen,
and
all who saw and heard
acclaimed
his fame.
But one  . . .
uttered calumny,
cruel, incautious words
to clamor
in the soul
and smash
the spirit
of
the painter, the poet,
the singer.
Worth diminished,
death
left
his picture spurned,
his poems unheard,
his song unsung.
 
 



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2020


The assignment in Jim's class was to write a free verse from a metered, rhyming poem. My choice was The Man Who Knew by Robert Service.

The Dreamer visioned Life as it might be,
And from his dream forthright a picture grew,
A painting all the people thronged to see,
And joyed therein -- till came the Man Who Knew,
Saying: "'Tis bad! Why do ye gape, ye fools!
He painteth not according to the schools."

The Dreamer probed Life's mystery of woe,
And in a book he sought to give the clue;
The people read, and saw that it was so,
And read again -- then came the Man Who Knew,
Saying: "Ye witless ones! this book is vile:
It hath not got the rudiments of style."

Love smote the Dreamer's lips, and silver clear
He sang a song so sweet, so tender true,
That all the market-place was thrilled to hear,
And listened rapt -- till came the Man Who Knew,
Saying: "His technique's wrong; he singeth ill.
Waste not your time." The singer's voice was still.

And then the people roused as if from sleep,
Crying: "What care we if it be not Art!
Hath he not charmed us, made us laugh and weep?
Come, let us crown him where he sits apart."
Then, with his picture spurned, his book unread,
His song unsung, they found their Dreamer -- dead.

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