General Poetry posted December 26, 2019


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Wishes During Meteor Showers

by A. Willow Bends

star
flying
defying
a set routine
there is no denying
the wonderful, beautiful scene
lying back in my chair, I breathe and lean
to realize the distance is infinite afar
inhaling the night air, fragrant and clean
wishing on meteors, silver, peach, green
can't blame one for trying
night sky pristine
relying
sighing
far


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Write a diatelle for this poetry contest. A diatelle has a set syllable count and a set rhyme.


The syllable count is: 1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1. The rhyme patter is: abbcbccaccbcbba. It is usually displayed centered. See an example here.


My family loves to lay in the driveway and watch meteor showers. We make wishes just as if they are falling stars. My 5 year old Grandson frequently comments about our last "shower watch". We saw some good ones and he was totally in awe!
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