General Poetry posted December 7, 2019


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A scene painted for a 4 year old girl

Tanka(dancing ladybugs)

by Pamusart

dancing ladybugs
hold each other's hands and feet
deep blue violet
lies 'neath rust tinged butterfly
happy garden for a child



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My little four year old friend saw my previous painting with the ladybugs and violets. She then gave me my new assignment. She said she wants ladybugs, a flower, and a butterfly. This is the result.

In a previous request from her, I made the mistake of thinking like an adult. She was too polite to say she did not like it. But, I could tell.

I ended up doing another one from a her point of view. I remembered that lesson with this painting.

Thank you for reading my poem

Painting is oil on canvas and titled Dancing Ladybugs
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