Romance Poetry posted December 3, 2019


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Those pain filled phone talks when distance creates chasms

My Sweet Dearest

by JLR

My sweet dearest! So many days you've been away,
I have stalled at six months of Tuesdays counting days.
You made me think this rotation would be your last.
Your voice sears my mind, for too many days have passed.
Empty words grip my soul, leave me to think you stray!

Clinging to every word, I resist my pleading
Even 'tho with great strain, my love strings are beating,
the distance is too much for the pain it causes.
My sweet dearest!

Before we end, I want to hear the message clear
Retell the words, love's refrains, I have held so dear.
Wrap gentle words in my ears, make my heart rebound,
repeat words of commitment, my soul will resound.
The lost Tuesdays I will forget if you'll come here.
My sweet dearest!



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#502
2019


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Author Notes Modified Rondeau

1. The form is created from three stanzas. A quintet--5 lines, a quatrain--4 lines and a sestet--6 lines
2. The first half of the first line in the quintet forms a refrain line. This refrain is used for lines 9 and 15.
3. The quintet has a rhyme scheme of b-b-c-c-b.
4. The quatrain has a rhyme scheme of b-b-c-A, where A is the refrain drawn from the first half of the first line of the poem.
5. The sestet is rhymed b-b-c-c-b-A, where A is again the refrain line.
6. Being a French form the meter is accentual syllabic.
The refrain line is usually 4 syllables or two verse feet. The refrain is, usually, the first part of the first line.

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