Spiritual Poetry posted December 1, 2019


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When life has no more bottom, we finally let go and Let God

The Darkest Night

by JLR

The darkest night of my Soul, my Christ came
I knew pains I would no longer contain.
I couldn't handle mounting more shameful sins.
Far too many known wrongs, I tried to spin.
In the darkest night of my soul, shame reigned.

Feeling YOU near, hearing my soulful bane,
as tears shed, dripping from my face, from shame,
God's forgiving me, it always has been,
the darkest night

On bended knee, I looked up at the Flame
knowing that to me you once again came.
My life once more on the righteous of paths
I bow low, unashamed, saved from God's Wrath.
Knowing my Savior came, my life, He claimed,
the darkest night.



Spiritual Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a spiritual poem on the theme of 'Change'


Rondeau a Spiritual Poem on Change
The rondeau is a syllabic French construct of three verses: a quintet, quatrain, and sestet. The lines are in two lengths, the main length and the refrain. The refrain is the first few words of the first line.
Author Notes

1. The form is created from three stanzas. A quintet--5 lines, a quatrain--4 lines and a sestet--6 lines
2. The first half of the first line in the quintet forms a refrain line. This refrain is used for lines 9 and 15.
3. The quintet has a rhyme scheme of b-b-c-c-b.
4. The quatrain has a rhyme scheme of b-b-c-A, where A is the refrain drawn from the first half of the first line of the poem.
5. The sestet is rhymed b-b-c-c-b-A, where A is again the refrain line.
6. Being a French form the meter is accentual syllabic.
The refrain line is usually 4 syllables or two verse feet. The refrain is, usually, the first part of the first line.

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