General Fiction posted November 8, 2019 |
a short story.
Evening in Montreal
by judester
i was staying with my friend at his basement apartment in Montreal.
Returning home one night, we met up with a homeless guy who sat just outside the apartment door trying to keep warm from the freezing weather.
My friend does not ever suffer fools lightly. He had lived there for a while and was familiar with the folks down on their luck.
Quite the opposite of my misguided goodwill.
Once inside, I suggested that we give the poor guy a cup of hot cream of carrot soup that we had made earlier.
My friend grudgingly agreed. I prepared the soup and added some toast, then opened the door and offered it generously to our 'guest.'
Bob was fuming slightly as we watched tv. I knew that he just wanted his cup back and the guy gone.
A few minutes later, there was a light knock on the door.
Bob jerked his head towards the door and pitched me a look that said 'go finish your little deed so I can relax please.'
I opened the door with a beautific smile, until I took in the scene.
The guy was leaning casually against the wall, tapping an unlit cigarette against the jamb and held out the empty bowl.
"Can I get a cup of coffee?"
My goodwill suddenly dried up as I took the cup, told him no, then softly closed the door.
From the living room, I could hear Bob chuckling.
A Good Turn Gone Wrong writing prompt entry
i was staying with my friend at his basement apartment in Montreal.
Returning home one night, we met up with a homeless guy who sat just outside the apartment door trying to keep warm from the freezing weather.
My friend does not ever suffer fools lightly. He had lived there for a while and was familiar with the folks down on their luck.
Quite the opposite of my misguided goodwill.
Once inside, I suggested that we give the poor guy a cup of hot cream of carrot soup that we had made earlier.
My friend grudgingly agreed. I prepared the soup and added some toast, then opened the door and offered it generously to our 'guest.'
Bob was fuming slightly as we watched tv. I knew that he just wanted his cup back and the guy gone.
A few minutes later, there was a light knock on the door.
Bob jerked his head towards the door and pitched me a look that said 'go finish your little deed so I can relax please.'
I opened the door with a beautific smile, until I took in the scene.
The guy was leaning casually against the wall, tapping an unlit cigarette against the jamb and held out the empty bowl.
"Can I get a cup of coffee?"
My goodwill suddenly dried up as I took the cup, told him no, then softly closed the door.
From the living room, I could hear Bob chuckling.
Returning home one night, we met up with a homeless guy who sat just outside the apartment door trying to keep warm from the freezing weather.
My friend does not ever suffer fools lightly. He had lived there for a while and was familiar with the folks down on their luck.
Quite the opposite of my misguided goodwill.
Once inside, I suggested that we give the poor guy a cup of hot cream of carrot soup that we had made earlier.
My friend grudgingly agreed. I prepared the soup and added some toast, then opened the door and offered it generously to our 'guest.'
Bob was fuming slightly as we watched tv. I knew that he just wanted his cup back and the guy gone.
A few minutes later, there was a light knock on the door.
Bob jerked his head towards the door and pitched me a look that said 'go finish your little deed so I can relax please.'
I opened the door with a beautific smile, until I took in the scene.
The guy was leaning casually against the wall, tapping an unlit cigarette against the jamb and held out the empty bowl.
"Can I get a cup of coffee?"
My goodwill suddenly dried up as I took the cup, told him no, then softly closed the door.
From the living room, I could hear Bob chuckling.
Writing Prompt Please write a very short story based on trying to help someone, but it's not appreciated. Fun or serious. No poetry. MAX words - 300 |
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