Romance Poetry posted November 3, 2019


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What I see when I look at you...

I See

by JLR

My eyes consume your presence sitting across from me,
I delight in seeing your beaming smile,
I see radiance with your skin aglow,
I visually observe tiny wrinkles as your face grins,
I am witness to your twinkling, green eyes,
I see lips moisten with the tip of the tongue,
I watch tantalized by the flaring of wisps of hair, flowing on the wind,
I admire you, mindful of that little tilt of your face, I see as you speak of words of joy,
I track with my sight, that you are that magnificent woman, in the very way you stand so tall.
I see a romantic soul, who places a smile on my face.  

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Senses writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a ten line poem (free-verse) about any one of the five senses. Do not use more than one sense.
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Write a ten line poem (free-verse) about any one of the five senses. Do not use more than one sense.

With my eyes, my world is fully complete, without my eyes the world would seem very bleak.
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