General Poetry posted October 20, 2019


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My imperfection.

I'm Not Perfect

by Raul1

I have made many grammar mistakes
I don't cry over them.
I will do what it takes.
It is better to improve on a poem.

I cover most of the English errors
by correcting those.
I will make my writing fairer.
But, sometimes my grammar flows.

My biggest flaw is on my sentences
that I need to correct.
Writers give me advice from their messages.
The grammar I need to perfect.

Somehow, I will overcome this flaw.
It won't be easy.
I will learn from what I saw
At least, a few of my sentences won't be choppy.

It looks like I will have this problem forever.
But, I don't think so.
I improve on it by understanding it better.
I like English grammar, though

I improve better by writing
I am not perfect.
We improve to write by learning.
We are all imperfect.



I Am Not Perfect writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a flaw that you see in yourself.


I hope that you all enjoy my poem.
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