Satire Poetry posted October 4, 2019

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Senryu (boat dream)

by Lance S. Loria

lake house is fulfilled
maintenance exceeds budget
boat slip is empty

Senryu Yourself writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Here is a chance to get to know some of your fellow Fanstorians! Who's brave enough to use satire or irony against yourself? Use 17 syllables OR LESS, as long as it follows a short/long/short format (defined by counting syllables).

I bought my dream lake house with pool, dock and sunrise open water view. It is costly to maintain. Now I cannot afford a boat. I occasionally rent one. My neighbors with boats tell me I am smart. I say nothing.
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