Family Poetry posted September 27, 2019


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
A husband asks why his wife left.

Why? I Ask

by RodG


Ten years we're wed . . . and you just left
a Friday afternoon that fall.
I took an early train from work
to find no one . . . no one at all.

I saw the station wagon gone,
but thought, "Claire's shopping, took her coat,
the kids and dog. They'll soon be back."
But by the sink I found your note.

"Dear Jer, I'm leaving, going home.
Don't ask me why I left today.
I didn't cheat, there's no one else,
but I'm unhappy, cannot stay."

A year has passed; my family now
resides six hundred miles from me.
The kids will text me twice a week,
but we're divorced, you've custody.

The papers came six months ago.
The grounds a term that makes no sense:
What's incompatibility?
What, Claire, went wrong? Am I that dense?

Could we have talked and worked things out?
Why did you leave? I've still no clue.
I've prayed to God, sought His advice.
I feel betrayed, but still love you.

Guess my career came first at times,
and we wed young, had kids too soon.
But, Claire, I thought you understood:
You were--you are--my sun, the moon.









Love's Betrayal. writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem, any style or length, about a lovers betrayal.

Recognized


Artwork is courtesy of Google images.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. RodG All rights reserved.
RodG has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.