General Poetry posted September 20, 2019

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haiku (sixteen syllables)

haiku (speedy hummingbird)

by Val Crisson

speedy hummingbird
grabs a sip of nectar on the fly
fast food

Haiku contest entry



Okay, this haiku is 5/9/2, which is 16 syllables. haiku do not have to be a 5/7/5 syllable count, but they can't be over 17 syllables and must read short/long/short. Please, read the directions on this contest. Thanks You
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