Children Poetry posted September 14, 2019


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
this 'story' has 'toys': a play on words

5-7-5 (imagination)

by Mark D. R.

imagination
this big rhino has iron*
word play perfected



Recognized


*The letters in 'iron' are found in the word 'rhino.'

With several reviews of my pseudo anagram 5-7-5 verse, the middle line might be rewritten as:

"this rhino has a big horn," or " rhino is 'horni' "

This rewrite may be stronger than my original ... LOL

Thanks to FanArtist for his imaginative animal.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by robertbradford at FanArtReview.com

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