General Poetry posted September 4, 2019


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A 5-7-5 Loop poem

Clouds

by kahpot

clouds shade the sunshine

~sunshine is the life of man~

man lives in the clouds



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Thank you David Ruhl for the artwork
I wish we could get our heads out of the clouds
and see what we are doing to our world.
I like trying new forms, hope this one works
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